L I M T E D
David Gamble saw the film last Saturday. I was very nervous. He said he liked it and I could feel my eyes moisten. At the end of the tripping scene he said “Wow!” and was still commenting on it as he walked out the door much later. At the end of the film he said “I certainly feel like I’ve been on a journey!” He told us the end worked, that the structure and pace overall worked. He had some small but constructive ideas. These ideas actually added 5 and a half seconds to the film but I think improved it. He made us think about other things too especially - are there too many music tracks in the film?
On Monday we did some more trims after cogitating over the weekend. We ended up cutting another 30 seconds by reducing a scene by three quarters and trimming another. The film was then just under 112 minutes. At the end of the day, at my behest, we took another look at the final scene. Three hours and many cuts, re-cuts, viewings, re-viewings we settled on a version only little different from the one before. A total blind alley.
On Tuesday, while nervously waiting for the screening, time seemingly standing still, I sent a copy of the rough cut to Marcel Barsotti, the composer I am desperate to have on the film. He has so much on now but I am desperate for him to do the music. The guy is a total genius, a revelation. Jonnie asked me what the contingency plan was. I said “Pray.” I hope we don’t have to.
In the afternoon I was gutted to find out that some sound things I had asked Axle to sort out before the screening were not done in time. This added more to my fear and worry about the screening. I was less than impressed. It was the same story with the new poster. All at the last minute. We had started the ball rolling 3 weeks ago to avoid a last minute rush but all to no avail.
At the test screening 78% of women liked the film but only 55% of men. I guess the film will be more divisive for men as a higher portion of men either loved it or didn’t care for it. No women at the screening disliked the film. Both figures are very positive as the film currently looks and sounds terrible without grading or any sound design. There was also a glowing endorsement for the end, for the story, for Malika and Callum, for the humour in the office, for the direction and the photography. The end being liked and understood was especially pleasing as me and Caroline are more happy with the end than elsewhere, having done more work on it. Having the leads as most liked characters is also very good news. The opposite would have been catastrophic.
Criticisms were laid at the door of the beginning and early middle (63% felt they were too long) and some of the office characters although Marrlen and Sark were also some peoples favourites!
I was very nervous at the screening. As I was getting myself an Armagnac (the cheapest one on the menu), Grace said to me “You should put that in the film.”
I replied “Maybe that would be a little unethical!” thinking she meant I should charge it to the film as a necessary expense.
“No” she replied “Invest that money!”
I was speechless. I’ve been working on this film almost solidly now for 10 months, raised a large proportion of the budget, put my own money into it, raided my friends bank accounts, raised additional but desperately needed further funds for it every week over the last month at the same time as being in the cutting room 24/7 and also lost so much work through needing to work on this film that I am now totally penniless. Not that I am alone in that, Jonnie’s commitment has been total as well.
Instead of finishing this film, if I my priorities were personal, I would be doing the script re-write assignment I had been offered for a £10,000 fee! Instead I am working on DEP so that it can be finished before its creditors finally lose patience and push the company into insolvency which would mean no-one ever gets paid a penny of the money that they are owed. Not even Cristina Corazza’s telephone bill!
Anyway, I wasn’t even actually paying for the Armagnac myself. I was charging it to another company!
After the screening and subsequent discussions, I got home at 2am and spent 2 hours pouring over and computing the figures until I had formulated a battle plan on how to improve the film. The next day was a bit of a wash out but we started implementing that plan yesterday and today.
I can see the end of the picture editing process is in sight now. I hope to lock the picture just before Cannes.
Straight after the screening last week, Jonnie left for France. We have been communicating every day since and he is still working hard on the film.
At the end of last week, during our fourth thorough pass on the film together (Caroline has done 3 on her own), we reduced it over three days to 109 minutes, then 106 then finally 105 minutes without titles. We concentrated on the beginning taking 4 minutes alone out of the first 25. We also reduced the wine scene, my favourite scene, which hurt but was an unfortunately necessity. The scene is a wonderful but needed to be reduced for overall pace.
This week we did three mini test screenings to people whose opinion I trust. A memorable one was for Oscar Salgado, a Spanish poet and cineaste. He really loved the film, laughed and cried in succession and understood it completely! He absolutely adored the tripping scene as well as the first meeting between Malika and Callum like many others have this week. Similar to David Gamble, his comments were small but incredibly astute. We implemented them immediately. After getting home he texted me to say “On the bicycle the full blow hit me; you’ve made a spiritual film and not only that, I believe it is a profoundly Buddhist film. Its title is a manifestation of a beautiful koan. Jodorowsky and Tarkovsky would be proud of you!” Later he texted again to praise the shot that had made Grace gasp, which he loved. the zoom into the wood as Callum and Malika approach it and the Sark phone improvisations. What a great response? You couldn’t hope for better! Tarkovsky being proud, of course, I can only dream of!!!!!!!!!
A koan, I learnt later, is a phase passed from master to teacher to short-circuit rational thought. For instance “What is the sound of one hand clapping?” The fact Oscar understood the spiritual dimension in the film is very affirming. I’ve always wanted to make a film with that vein but to find the subject matter to do it has been hard. Not that my previous films have been totally devoid of spirituality! Apart from endless water imagery, it’s no coincidence that in “The Poet”, Andrey hears the church bells before he dies, that Phil sits by a lake with a dead fish in “Boston Kickout” or that when James in “The Frontline” is at his lowest ebb he meets the old woman, a voice of cynicism, framed in huge wide shot under an enormous neon cross.
Later I thought of the demographic that liked the film and indeed of the 5 out of the 36 people so far who didn’t care for it much. All were men but of vastly differing ages and tastes. I do not really know what commonality they shared that informed their opinion. We tried to make the questionnaire tell us about the people as well as the film but did we miss out the questions “Do you believe in God?” or “Do you think of about the purpose of Life?”
Along with the other mini-screenings we amassed an 80% like rating, up from last week. A substantial majority also thought the length perfect now also. The guinea pigs were all male, that was who I wanted to target. 60% loved it and no-one disliked it, although Chris Auty, a dear friend, loved Malika at the beginning but hated her by the end. Apparently she reminded him of a French girlfriend he’d had, who had consumed too many philosophical or esoteric tracts and never wanted to sleep with him!
Now we have started fine cutting the film. I hope for picture lock on Monday as the time I am away will be much needed by Axle, who I met on Thursday. This week, thus, may have been my final full week going to Elephant and Castle. The only thing I won’t miss is the dippers! So far on the bus trip to the tube station, I have now been pick-pocketed three times. It takes a usual form; the bus is packed, some black guy lurches into me and slips his hand in my pocket or unzips my bag. I have lost in past months, a wallet, a phone, an oyster card and many receipts (what they do with those I don’t know). Last week I caught a guy brazenly with his hand deep in my pocket. I looked straight into his misty crack filled gaze and said “Not this time!” He winked at me, left the bus and crossed to the other side of the street’s bus stop so he could get the same bus straight back down the other side of the New Kent Road, his zone of operation.
I have so many things that have been piling up over the last few months that need to be addressed before Cannes but I barely have the time to do them. I need to clone myself into four. On top of that, HM customs and thieves still haven’t given us a registration number after me providing yet more information!
One worry that may be solved tomorrow is music licenses. Hopefully Samantha Crompton, the music supervisor, will turn up in the cutting room. I have been waiting for her for two months now and thus I don’t even know who has written the songs I am using!
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